可以帮忙看看这段里有什么语法错误吗？急！在线等！ 可以帮忙看看这段里有什么语法错误吗？急！在线等！
nowdays in China food sanitation has becoming a more and more serious problem
有错。has becoming改成has become
every day we even do not know how much unhealthy food we eat which may full of food additive 有错。which may full of food additive改成which may be full of food additive
these would harmful to our body 有错。would be harmful to
if you want to eat some delicious food in the resterant有错。restaurant 餐馆
it is quit expensive and waste time有错。quiet expensive and前后应该是并列的结构，前面用形容词，后面也应该是，所以waste time改成time-comsuming。另外，这句作为论点有点奇怪。
In one word有错。总之是in a word
vegetables and fruits has less fat 有错。是have。另外，dieting是节食。节食就一定是不吃肉吗
hypertension and coronary heart disease and so on 不要and so on
keep healthy 不是health
hit two birds with one stone,isn’t it? 我觉得有点怪。isn't it 用法可能有误
我觉得作者的论点有点奇怪。题目是节食是好是坏。
可以帮忙看看这段里有什么语法错误吗？急！在线等！~
Is Dieting Good or Bad?
As far as I want to say,dieting is good.Some people always think that dieting means you can not get enough nutrition which is bad for your health.However, in my opinion ,this is not ture.As a matter of fact,dieting means the less burden you give to the stomach.
As we all know, nowdays in China, food salfty is becoming a more and more serious problem.There are so many food which have quality problems around us that we even do not know how much unhealthy food we eat which may full of food additive, hormone and posion chemical composition. During digestion process, these would harmful to our body and cause diseases. So I think the less food you eat, the less burden you give to your digestive system.Besides, if you want to eat some delicious food in a resterant, it will be quite expensive and takes a lot fo time.
In one word, eating less does not cause malnutrition. In fact, food experts tell us we should choose vegetables and fruits istead of meat because compared with meat, vegetables and fruits has less fat. As we all konw fat can makes us fatter than before and causes illness such as heart disease .So, in order to keep healthy, let us have a diet. At the same time, we can also stay slim.So why don't we kill two birds with one stone.
我只是粗略地改了下，不过看你应该是初中差不多吧。建议不要写长句子，容易出错。你的这篇作文可能有点偏题了，最多60%吧（改好后）。写英语作文一定要记住，一个句子只有一个主语。尽量不要写长句子，除非很有把握。最后注意单词拼写不要错了，单复数不要错了。
May 19,2011
Dear Madam,
I am writing to complain that my dorm light has been broken for several days, I called the dorm keeper to repair it a long time ago, but nobody came to repair the light.This caused us not only much inconvenience but also a lot of trouble.As you will realize, I am extremely upset and dissatisfied with this.I hope that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
XX
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