请帮我改改下面的语法错误，拜托拜托 拜托~~高人帮我改下语法错误~~在线等~~感谢~~
1． 主从句叠置
1) There are more and more students (加who )like to use the computer.
2) There are still many problems (加that )should be noted and resolved.
2． 简单句叠置
I like chatting on line very much, (加so) I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
3． 从句叠置
As is known to all that (省略that)computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
4． 句子成分缺失
If (we) work hard, we will surely be successful.
5． 语序错误
1) Why(加do) college students spend more and more time on the computer?
2) I often wonder where have they( they与have交换位置） got their money.
（二）动词错误
1．时态错误
Many people thought(改为think) that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
2．语态错误
1) I have（加been) excited several days at the news that you will come here.
2) Most of the students satisfy (改为are satisfied)with the service in the dining hall.
3．单复数错误
1) Wise man seek (seeks)opportunities rather than wait for them.
2) Someone are (is)afraid that computer may control men in the future.
4．非谓语动词错误
1) Let me to (去掉to)represent everyone to say “hello” to you.
2) Do (Doing)exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.
3) (We )Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.
（三）代词错误
1) We can use computers in doing everything you( we) like.
2) A college student should be able to do their (his)washing on their own.
（四）冠词错误
1) (A)Horse is an useful animal.
2) The exam will be held in the (去掉the)December, 2004.
（五）词性错误
1) I wish you can consider my suggests(suggestion).
2) If a person wants to success(succeed), he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.
二、用词错误
1) Students must know how to apply (use )a computer.
2) People can touch( meet) many new things on the Internet.
3) The purpose of this letter is to react ( reflect )some opinions on the service in the dining hall.
三、表达习惯错误
1) Why generated so large a change? -why was there so large a change?
2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer. --Now a P4computer is only worth 6000yuan
3) A room often lives 6-8 students. ----6-8 students live in a room
4) I think this great change has three reasons--I think there are three reasons for this great change.
5) The prices of the food are too expensive.- The price of the food is too high
6) The reason for this is because (改为that)some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.
四、标点符号及大小写错误
1) However, every coin has two sides, (。）I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
2) The man was racing down the street. Because （ because) he was late for the class.
3) At last I want to let you know, ( 去掉逗号）I love our university very much.
4) My favorite sports are swimming、（，）jogging、（，）mountaineering and playing table tennis.
The best English film in my eyes is《Forrest Gump》.（去掉《》）
liking being // I like chatting on the line so much that I go to the net bar almost every weenkend.//
that替换成逗号 //
If we work hard //Why do //where they have got
think //
have been // are satisfied
men // is
? //Doing // Having been
to do // ?
a // (the)
suggestions // succeed
use //
1) More and more students like to use the computer.
2) There are still many problems to be noted and resolved.
It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
Many people thought that the Internet would be more useful in the future.
If we work hard, we will surely be successful.
拜托~~高人帮我改下语法错误~~在线等~~感谢~~~
Please note that words within【】 are mistakes replaced by a word or words immediately after each of them. Words within （）are add-ins.
I 【have the honor】am honored to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, [at] in a small town of Hami 【city】 City, Xinjiang Province. I [graduate] graduated form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study （in the） UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And 【i】 I also think 【the university】 （that） universities 【of】 in the UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral 【english】 English and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would [be] make my life more interesting.
In （the） past four years, 【i】 I have acquired （the） basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But 【i】 I think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the 【studying】 study of human 【resources】 resource management because it is a subject that interests me greatly. The globalisation has provoked a serious crisis in the actual 【word】 world economy giving human 【resources】 resource management an important role in finding a solution to this crisis. I believe that human beings are the principal players in any organization, they are flexible and the only ones who can manage the process of change that enterprises need to respond to （in） this difficult times.
Upon graduation form your school, I hope 【i】 I will be able to join a large and dynamic company and follow a career in human 【resources】 resource management. I am sure that （this is an important factor for） the successful future of any ambitious company 【lies here】. I also hope to acquire a lot of experience in order to be able to give me more confidence 【to】 in my work.
I learned form your brochure that your school has a strong faculty and a very good academic environment. The university （is） located （in） west London 【.And it have】 with convenient transportation. But the maintenance is half of London. And the university very much 【welcome】 welcomes foreign students. Hence my desire to further my education in your country, especially at your university, where I think I can 【receiver】 receive comprehensive 【training】 trainings. It seems that the courses you offer are precisely what I wish to take. I am especially interested in those 【course】 courses on management and information resources. I therefore see your program as my first choice as I try to upgrade my education. I believe that such training will help put me on the forefront of the human resource management in China.
你的翻译不算太差，只是常犯些基础错误（比如cannot)
以下是我帮你改的，不要以为意思变了。其实有些句子你是按照国语的句子循序来翻译，到了英语里就觉得有些不对！ 不过这也是很多中国人犯的错，
比如:你叫什么名?
会翻译成：your name is what?
简单，不过容易犯！日后请注意这一点，有时一句话在国语是顺着来读，但在英语要反过来读！
Using outside capital in operation and production of an enterprise to generate profit is known as debt management. It is a common method in operating business. Debt provides necessary funding for production of business. In addition, it enables business to benefit from the financial leverage effect and therefore enhances the level return on capital employed. Nevertheless, it will generate greater financial risk if debt is overused by enterprise.
The advantages of debt management are:
-capital can be raise quickly and therefore possible opportunities in the market can be utilised, which increases income. (Seize主要用作领地)
- Enables businesses to establish the time value of money concepts（这句你翻译得很好！）. Therefore enhances the way in which the capital is managed, *in a sense of responsibility and under-pressure (urgency不适合). This should strengthen financial management, which will improve efficiency in capital usage and economic benefits.
-企业所得税税前扣除贷款利息这里有点模糊！我虽然读会计但没有在国内读过，但我想应该是这样：Interest payable is deducted from operating profit before corporation tax，therefore income tax expenses are minimized, which means it reduces the cost of funds.（是指贷款利息不包括在所得税计算中吧O(∩_∩)O）,
-Inflation risks are transferred to the creditors, therefore owners/shareholders are not affected.
If the business uses debt capital improperly*, this* will bring in* plenty* of negative impacts* to the enterprise: [a lot of](这个在语法中视为口语，正确语法不用a lot of)
First, debt management may lead to the negative effects(可以考虑impacts，觉得好一些) of financial leverage effect.
Secondly, debt management is liable to the risk of not paying debt on time.
Lastly, debt management increases the risk of refinancing
Therefore, enterprises should understand the current operating state of the business *in order to determine a reasonable debt levels.
以上是我的翻译，希望可以帮到你！有什么不明白在问我，我一般一周才上一两次百度，如果急的话就去我的空间里找我的email吧！
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